The vocals in the beginning could be cool, but it seems you just used a single sample and pitch shifted it to the notes you wanted, and to me it sounds excessively cheesy. I'd suggest trying to get your hands on at least a soundfont or some kind of multisample or even a dedicated vst for choir kind of work unless you're just going for that kind of vibe. It's a bit repetitive overall for my tastes. The chord stabs are cool, the break is nice but both could use more variation. The vocal in the background sounds a bit like a squeak toy; I think this is exacerbated because you're just using it to often. I might would pitch it down a bit and maybe even shift the formants downwards a little on it. There's some good elements here, mostly I'd focus on putting some more variation in. Right now, to my ears, the track neither grooves nor develops. I think you'd stand a better chance of making a track that kind of grows somewhere; trying to put in more of a groove feel at this point would involve rewriting a lot of material. Or you could just move along and start on the next track, and count this one as a good learning experience. Hope this helps