i like it, its a good start
couple things:
in that intro, id take that mid range synth out, the intro will be interesting enough without it
id work on those sort of bass stabs that start at 0.43 (maybe just have one note play instead of like 4, but stick an envelope on it so it has movement)
i reckon a drum fill at 1.08 would sound good as well
maybe some atmos shit in different places etc
but yeah good start,