Advise on intros?

[RevTech]

I have an example of something I tried.

http://www.reverbnation.com/revtech

Go to Faces of War

 

[Toejam]

REVVIE THATS SOUNDS COOL

LITTLE TIP IF YOUR STUCK FOR HIGH END SOUNDS, TRY RECORDING YOURSELF PUTTING TOFFEE LUMPS DOWN YOUR JAPSEYE, THIS IS A CLIPZ TRICK

KEEPO DOIN WHAT YOU DO, DONT BOTHER WITH INTROS NO ONE LIKES A SHOWOFF

 

[Dan M]

REVVIE THATS SOUNDS COOL

LITTLE TIP IF YOUR STUCK FOR HIGH END SOUNDS, TRY RECORDING YOURSELF PUTTING TOFFEE LUMPS DOWN YOUR JAPSEYE, THIS IS A CLIPZ TRICK

KEEPO DOIN WHAT YOU DO, DONT BOTHER WITH INTROS NO ONE LIKES A SHOWOFF

that is funny