Advice/feedback?

[Insist]

Hello,

I'm new to this site and to producing and I was wondering if you could give me some feedback and advice on my new tune,

Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/insist%2Fforgotten

 

[elmaruk]

that's better

you have some nice sounds and stuff. the beats very minimal.

it doesn't really feel d&b to me if that's what you were aiming for. it's a bit too orchestral for me.

then again i've just noticed your 13, so fair play. keep at it.

 

[Insist]

Haha

and thanks, i'll think about that for next time

Taa

 

[elmaruk]

stick around bud & you'll get some invaluable advice from the chaps round here

 

[LEX86]

Hi I think the drums could be a little louder and also the sub bass down a octave or two? But dude I'm still learning to so I can't say to much lol.. Good job keep it up.

 

[Insist]

Thanks for the advice

 

[Tone1304]

I agree with LEX, just out of curiosity, how long you been doin this for?

 

[Insist]

About 2 months

 

[Tone1304]

trust me I've only been producing for just under a year, you'll progress pretty quickly
quick piece of advice, you should try to learn all of your DAW's shortcuts it will help your work flow in the long run

 

[Insist]

Haha thanks, im sure, and i will do!

 

[equilibrium]

sounds pretty good

and keep in mind the use of space is where "feel" comes into play. here are some examples. listen to how they let empty space create anticipation for the next note.

[video=youtube_share;S4V-bHxSZRs]http://youtu.be/S4V-bHxSZRs?hd=1[/video]

 

[Insist]

Yee, nice songs, ill keep it in mind

 

[IV4]

Keep at. By the time your 21. You will be awesome.

 

[Insist]

Haha thanks man, i deffo will do