don't pay any attention to Moskit hes just jelly he cant produce
Nice little vibey hook, bit happy for my own personal tastes but its decent regardless. Piano section is nice switch for the breakdown but i was hoping the second drop would be a bit different. The addition of vocals does help but id say its not enough to keep interest.
Drums sound very weak in the mix but i suspect its simply a problem with your sounds fighting for frequencies. Keep learning about eq and put a little more effort into mix/master n you should be good.