Lmao^^^^not bad but you need more work for sure because sound kinda empty,but considering that is wip you are on good way,also i would suggest to spice intro little bit with some breaks,with rolled off low freq or something like that!!
try to fill the space - bass, rides, hats, percussions, pads , whatever. I usually try to make room for new instruments. Even if u have mastering / mixdown problems you will solve them in a matter of days.