DnB Absent - Without You (Liquid) - Feedback appreciated !

[Absent]

Hey guys,

Spent the best part of the last week trying mold this one into a nice chilled liquid number.

I'm a bit unsure of some of the levels on some of the elements or the overall structure (as happens when you listen to something a good thousand times haha)

Any feedback at all is appreciated !

https://soundcloud.com/absentdnb%2Fabsent-without-you-demo

 

[MODUZ]

Hey man, I like your song. Sound fresh.. Maybe the jumpy chords sound a bit dissonant but not bad at all, is experimental i guess.. You can donw the volume of that piano.. Is my suggestion!!

 

[Flux Betazerfall]

This rising bass is really something. It has the sound of a liquid/jungle esque tune to it but it also really has its own thing going too. Pretty memorable.