A track with broken beatz, suggestion about the sound plz! [IDM]

[Rajstah Vibe]

https://soundcloud.com/rajstah%2Frajstah-vibe-thru-the-mirrors%2Fs-YRUln

Dunno if the mix is ok, but any suggestion about everything in general it's vital!
I'm still working on this.
Plz, give any feedback...
Cheers!
Luca

 

[elmaruk]

for me, musically it's a bit too much. sum cool ideas tho man.

 

[Rajstah Vibe]

musically it's a bit too much

Not clear... too much what?

 

[elmaruk]

too much goin on for my head bro

 

[Rajstah Vibe]

too much goin on for my head bro

lol... got it... yeah.. it's a bit messy! Will clean up...
What's the sound that impressed u more?
Any other opinion???

 

[elmaruk]

lol... got it... yeah.. it's a bit messy! Will clean up... ?

Hmm, not so much messy. just like not chilled enough for me. other people may like it tho, just my opinion.

My favorite sound? umm, i like the reversed sound at 2.29.

 

[Rajstah Vibe]

yeah...
I've listened to ur sc. I understand what u mean. Good stuff on ur page!!!
This is my first attempt to IDM... Thanks for ur time nd listen, even if not ur cup of tea!

 

[elmaruk]

No worries.

Thanks for checking out my cloud too! glad ya like it

 

[Rajstah Vibe]

some more opinion?