A track iv'e just about finished

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by glenemy, Oct 16, 2007.

  1. glenemy

    glenemy Enemy is here

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    Hi i'm pretty new to dnb forum but have been a jungalist for just over ten years.
    This is a track iv'e just about finished that i wanted sum feedback on, oh and it's not dnb it's a sort of breakbeat urban tune. Feel free to comment good or bad i can take it.
    Here's the link http://www.megaupload.com/?d=M3PZIKJ9
     
  2. glenemy

    glenemy Enemy is here

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    oh also there's gonna be some lyric's mc'ing over the top also.
     
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    glenemy Enemy is here

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    people sum feedback plz, even if you think its the worst tune you've ever heard i'd like to know as it will help me in the tune makin sence
     
  4. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    sounds quite cool not really my thing tho.
    sounds kinda dupsteppy if ya no wat i mean.
    plz check out my tunes at http://www.myspace.com/djscuk
     
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    well i have to admit it is pretty awful. no amount of mcing is going to change that either.
    keep at it though glenemy, you do seem to have the knack.
     
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    glenemy Enemy is here

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    I appreciate the honesty logicz, but what do you dislike about it, as it will help me not make the same mistake's again
     
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    yeah, log's statement actually could make your point obvious about people not responding (don't get mad at me now). honestly, your effort is in my opinion quite uninspired, lacking structure, predictable, repetitive, and boring. so I think the reason people don't respond to a tune like this, is because they rather want to safe the words than slack you off. please don't get me wrong, the beat patterms were quite alright, but that was about it for me really.
    I say glenemy; you got a vibe going on keep working on it. bring more sounds into it, tell a story, put soul and inspiration in it and take the time for it. amaze a listener by twists, surprises and structure. use more effects and timbre, anything that goes for you with the tune.
    good luck!
     
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    glenemy Enemy is here

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    yeah i hear what your sayin, and I know I should spend more time on my tune's, Again I respect the honesty, although the comment's I've received off you and logicz are makin me wonder weather I should forget makin tune's altogether, I won't tho I will just come back stronger from this, once again thank's to all those who have commented on this tune.
     
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    Reactor Grits lick a shot

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    the last thing I want is to keep anyone from producing (ok that might be a bit of a bold statement come to think of it)! you've seen my point; being direct and that often coming with some harsh words which by all means are well meant, you have a new peddle to go forward again!
     
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    yeah I rather the truth as that way I improve as a producer, rather than making the same error's, Reactor Grit's (original name btw) I salute you and welcome your feedback on future track's.
     
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    Reactor Grits lick a shot

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    leave the ' mate ;) and np!
     
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    glenemy Enemy is here

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    sorry Grit's I'm a bit slow today, what did that last post mean
     
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    glenemy Enemy is here

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    I get it I made a mistake with the grammar stuff and your saying no prob's, I wouldn't use the grammar stuff in post's but on another site they use the grammar against you, because they have nothing else of substance to right.
     
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    Sorry man, not my thing. I think its funky tho, could see it on an advert for jeans or something.
    Keep at it mate.

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    yeah thank's for the feedback