A Track i've been working on.

[risto orpus]

A track i've been working on for some time now, too afraid of posting it before having some professional ears seer trough it first.
So please, be as harsh as you feel the need to be.
I would aprecciate it ALOT.
https://soundcloud.com/risto-orpus-112123016%2Fwip12

 

[Rounder RG]

The links not working for me.

Edit : Fixed it ->

Risto Orpus - WIP

 

[WhoSayReload?]

Hi hat is too quiet on the intro, you can barely hear it. I like the idea of the track its got a nice bouncy funk to it, maybe leave that switch up for later on in the track or for second drop as it seems too sudden to completely switch the track, dance music is all about simplicity in structure, and making your tune easily memorable. Would recommend posting full tracks rather than clips too, allows us to properly hear your tune and give better feedback and gives you good practice in finishing tunes! Liked the vibe of the clip overall, so keep at it! Give us something more to listen to!