A noob looking for suggestions! :)

Discussion in 'Production' started by 3YEZ, Sep 18, 2011.

  1. 3YEZ

    3YEZ New Member

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    Hello, I'm one year old and have been producing music since about a month ago now.



    This is a 155bpm D&B.... If anyone can tell me what specific sub-genre or whatever it is then I'd appreciate that.

    What I'm looking for is suggestions of where I can improve the track and such. Thanks!

    edit:
    This is no longer a WIP. It's completed.

    Still can make suggestions though, which I can bare in mind for other tracks.
     
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  2. Tokalosh

    Tokalosh New Member

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    ONE YEAR OLD :/ EH ? HA !!

    Ive seen that no one fancies helping you out here. i think its hard to say this is dnb as its 155. you have some good ideas but i think
    the main thing is structure like ......intro, break ,drop ,break ,drop that kind of thing. by saying all this im not saying im the best producer in the world but this
    sort of thing helps your tunes to sound more pro an they look better in wave for. just keep making more an more beats an enjoy it,you will make more tunes
    your really happy with an look back an see your progression. COOLIO peace !

     
  3. 3YEZ

    3YEZ New Member

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    Thanks for a response. But, yeah.. It's a bit late now lol. I actually decided to go ahead and finish it off today. The track you heard was the final. It's just that I kept the soundcloud link the same.


    I know it's not really DnB .. but it has elements in there that relate to DnB. :)
     
  4. joncarr

    joncarr New Member

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    If You are interested in having a Dj spin your tracks then structure is crucial. If you could careless if a Dj spins your work or not then just let your track flow bro.
     
  5. mistasfx

    mistasfx MISTA SFX

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    well one thing its missing b4 it can even be filed as drum n bass is BASS.... u need some sub bass in there m8
     
  6. 3YEZ

    3YEZ New Member

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    Hey, thanks. It does have sub-bass, it's just really feint? ;)

    I will bare in mind that I need to add more bass.
     
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    mistasfx MISTA SFX

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    i aint pickin up any sub through my speakers m8