a nights work

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by rysk, Aug 5, 2012.

  1. rysk

    rysk Part-time waster

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    made this tonight out of boredom, i actually intend to finish this one (pretty sure i say the same about everything i try and make)

     
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    ScottyEightSix HUGE EARS > COMEDY CHIN

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    I like the intro, needs a bit of work tho. Not too keen on the drop
     
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    I like the style. Very ominous. I agree with Sc0tty on it needing work. Maybe give that bass some bit crusher, etc. And when the bass goes up a octave higher, keep the cut off from raising too much, cause then the sound gets a bit empty and boring. More variation, etc.

    It's coming good, though. Keep it up, champ.
     
  4. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    its shit you should kill yourself
     
  5. rysk

    rysk Part-time waster

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    i was about to say the same thing...but the track in your sig is actually pre decent...but you should still kill yourself.
     
  6. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    lerl

    na i dont want to be a cunt to a budding producer the intro is quite nice but the drop is lacking quite abit mate
    the intro sounds probably shouldnt continue on the drop
    drums get kinda drowned out by ur bass
    i like the lower pitch bass but the higher bit is kinda grating
    overall drums are ok but gettin overpowered by bass
    part of bass is good id lose the other or change it
    intro sounds are cool id keep them but not on the drop
     
  7. alcaponeuk

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    the track rolls alot, the breaks in the drums should be filled with the same hi hats to keep the tune rolling! its got a sick flow and sick movement so keep it that way and fill in those little gaps in the drums, other than that just finish it, the subs nice man i wouldnt really change anything else
     
  8. rysk

    rysk Part-time waster

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    thanks for the feedback

    bounced what more i'd done before my computer shit itself