a neurofunk dnb song i made

[Sigi Feij]

ive made this song in reason , any tips or suggestions?

http://soundcloud.com/sigi1990/modnar-extinct-of-the

 

[Balthazaar]

Not bad,but i think that snare i overcompressed,nice basslines imho it just needs better arrangement it is lacking some flow..other than that good job

 

[Sigi Feij]

thanks for the comment! , i think your totaly right about either the compression and the flow. but how would you suggest id fix that?

 

[Elzerk]

Layer the snare, volume down the "lower end" of the snare and make it snappy. More constant hi-hat's? And it has a weird time signature I'm not sure I like it. ;o But the stabs and basses are ok. The mix down isn't too good either.