A little something

[Mr.Alavi]

Herz a little messing around in fruti loops...
My cubase doesnt work so i couldnt master the track.

http://rapidshare.com/files/103585953/drumandfakinbejs.mp32.mp3.html

I dont actually have any dnb and i listend to it once or twice(in need for speed)lol,so give feedback,and dont be to harsh!
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[dar kist]

no one will be harch here mate,

not bad for a first track, the drums are distorting, kicks way to loud, snare needs to be louder, overal the tunes creative , just sorta end when you think its about to drop again,

my advice is liten to some good dnb, scrap the need for speed stuff, no offense but its
rubbish, have a listen to , Die and clipz, evol intent, spor, phoney, chase and status, calibre , concord dawn, dillinja, goldie, hypes mixes, ewun the gun, lynx etc

 

[Mr.Alavi]

Thanks for the advice man

 

[vickvega]

drums are distorted but that can be an easy fix-like the synth arp flows nice
for a first tune man its actually pretty good -werk on some basics ie drum sound and sound quality of overall tune
keep up the push