DnB A liquid tune i've been working on

[AcidShroom]

Hello, here's a tune i've been working on today and here is the result :

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Facidshrooom%2Fwip-it-is

would like some feedback on it!


EDIT: uploaded teh wrong version at first, now it's good

 

[Euph]

Super smooth, love the piano. Would maybe like the drums to carry on around 1:51, possibly a breakdown section before what you have there at the moment?

 

[Pathochrome]

You got a new follower.

 

[hughhardiemusic]

i like a lot of the elements in this...the backwards piano is wicked, the little gaps in the bass line, the cymbally break is nice too. The main snare sound I'd change its not the best sample, i'd add more to the drums in general as well, some nicely programmed hats, a tom roll...I'd also move the kicks n snares around a bit to create more variation

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fhugh-hardie%2Fhugh-hardie-tearing-me-apart

 

[AcidShroom]

Thanks for feedback all. Glad you like it!
Well, i'll dig into the drums, variation is neede yea!