intro sounds very oldschool'ish. i like! after that it goes downhill tho. hats and snare really lack something, ie punch or just more 'feel'. that bassline-riff is good, but the bassline itself isnt. build up to the second drop is good aswell, i really dig those oldschool chords.
yeah, all in all theres lots of stuff missing to keep it interesting. the foundation is there already, go and finish it!
big ups