A Fishy work in progress:P

Killer... I got it to play! Needed to let it wait for about 15 seconds... guess I was too impatient yesterday to allow it to load.

(alright)

Can't fault the Intro. My ears are off today so I will refrain from giving Mix advice today : )

The Track is lush but imo incomplete. The drums would benefit from some various fillwork/edits and there's room in your Mix for a couple Mid Range 'low end like' Layers. A couple Techy/Edgey Leads zippin in and out in contrast to the Bass would be interesting I think.

My main contention with the track is the lack of variation on your SD... gotta have some double hits/fills, something somewhere : ))) That SD gets stale quick.

Very relaxed piece, the Pads are lovely and the Bass is jamming (I love the riff and the Patch is very clean and pleasing to my ears in the cheap Headphones I'm using atm).


:rockon:
 
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