hey, real christmas tune here! good ambiences and stuff
to point some things out, the sub bass is a bit too high in the mix imo! but maybe my ears are just tired or something...
also, the hi hats seem a bit robotic, you could fix that by layering some other hi hats on top in just certain parts.
have to agree with neomind some elements do sound over quantized which makes it lose some of the vibe which is a shame as musically this a great track - I'd try to humanize it up a bit - good work though!
intro sounds very oldschool'ish. i like! after that it goes downhill tho. hats and snare really lack something, ie punch or just more 'feel'. that bassline-riff is good, but the bassline itself isnt. build up to the second drop is good aswell, i really dig those oldschool chords.
yeah, all in all theres lots of stuff missing to keep it interesting. the foundation is there already, go and finish it!