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ARTFX

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#4
Huh I just posted a comment.. :-x

Ahh well I love the intro, great sounds in there mate!
Pretty good drum work, and great synth work!
Am looking forward to the final version.
 

Neomind

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hey, real christmas tune here! good ambiences and stuff
to point some things out, the sub bass is a bit too high in the mix imo! but maybe my ears are just tired or something...
also, the hi hats seem a bit robotic, you could fix that by layering some other hi hats on top in just certain parts.

Good ambience! keep on it man ;)
 

Fishy:)

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Thanks for the feedback neomind! ill definitly gonna check that out in the morning:) now im exhausted after workin ith these tracks all day hehe..
Anyway updated version up now:)
 
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#8
have to agree with neomind some elements do sound over quantized which makes it lose some of the vibe which is a shame as musically this a great track - I'd try to humanize it up a bit - good work though!
 

horace111

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Sounds alternative in a good way, nice sounds and atmosphere going on there, the mix needs some polishing here and there, but nothing too serious :)
 

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dude that high end perc needs bringing out! sounds like rats running glass in the background! still feeling this tho dude and the newer update sounding just as good!
 

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Rats running on glass ur funny man hehe:p I donno man i think it sounds pretty good myself but i can listen again tomorrow bet my ears tired as fuck
 

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intro sounds very oldschool'ish. i like! after that it goes downhill tho. hats and snare really lack something, ie punch or just more 'feel'. that bassline-riff is good, but the bassline itself isnt. build up to the second drop is good aswell, i really dig those oldschool chords.

yeah, all in all theres lots of stuff missing to keep it interesting. the foundation is there already, go and finish it!

big ups
 
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