A Fishy work in progress:P

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  1. Fishy:)

    Fishy:) Active Member

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    Some shit im workin on right now, what u guys think??
     
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    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    You have comment on Soundcloud. :D
     
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    Fishy:) Active Member

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    I do? where:S
     
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    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Huh I just posted a comment.. :-x

    Ahh well I love the intro, great sounds in there mate!
    Pretty good drum work, and great synth work!
    Am looking forward to the final version.
     
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    Fishy:) Active Member

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    Strange dident get any comments :D but thanks anyway man!
     
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    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    hey, real christmas tune here! good ambiences and stuff
    to point some things out, the sub bass is a bit too high in the mix imo! but maybe my ears are just tired or something...
    also, the hi hats seem a bit robotic, you could fix that by layering some other hi hats on top in just certain parts.

    Good ambience! keep on it man ;)
     
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    Thanks for the feedback neomind! ill definitly gonna check that out in the morning:) now im exhausted after workin ith these tracks all day hehe..
    Anyway updated version up now:)
     
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    have to agree with neomind some elements do sound over quantized which makes it lose some of the vibe which is a shame as musically this a great track - I'd try to humanize it up a bit - good work though!
     
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    Aight man:) ill take all of ur comments to consideration! and keep on workin!
     
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    Nice tune! I like the melody! I think you need more going on in the high end, wether its splashy cymbols or more variations in the hats.

    Biggups!
     
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    i think a nice guitare riff here n there would slide perfectly into this :p

    also boost ur hi end percussion man, its wwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaay back in the mix!
     
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    Aight man:p trying to keep the perc abit low, thats what ive learned but il try it out:p
     
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    smoooooooooooooothhhh:)
     
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    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    Sounds alternative in a good way, nice sounds and atmosphere going on there, the mix needs some polishing here and there, but nothing too serious :)
     
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    Thanks guys:) new version up now:p its finished for now might change up some stuff later tho
     
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    dude that high end perc needs bringing out! sounds like rats running glass in the background! still feeling this tho dude and the newer update sounding just as good!
     
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    Rats running on glass ur funny man hehe:p I donno man i think it sounds pretty good myself but i can listen again tomorrow bet my ears tired as fuck
     
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    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    can't get it to play???

    Is this the same track that I just reviewed in another thread?
     
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    intro sounds very oldschool'ish. i like! after that it goes downhill tho. hats and snare really lack something, ie punch or just more 'feel'. that bassline-riff is good, but the bassline itself isnt. build up to the second drop is good aswell, i really dig those oldschool chords.

    yeah, all in all theres lots of stuff missing to keep it interesting. the foundation is there already, go and finish it!

    big ups
     
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    Thanks people, nah its not the same track