A couple of my tracks.

hay man keep working on it second one sounded bit better
drums in the first one need lots or work they just really sound like single hits not drums.

take a good look in the production section there's a lot of good stuff in there.
 
Alright.

Listened to the first one: It's all pretty much like presets from synths and drum machines. The snare is a bit overpowering in all it's noisyness. Maybe you could go more for transient power (snap) than that all powerful force. The kick needs pushing up too i think.

A lot of dnb is just that, drums and basses, so focus on tweaking those. You don't need to have 4 different synth melodies going on, you'll do much better if you focus that energy on 1 sound and make it interesting enough and have some movement and sonic variation in it.

Keep at it, I guess you're really just started all this business.
 
Cheers for the feedback fellas. Nice to get some honest opinions. Most of my mates just say "yeah, thats wicked" to whatever i play them, which don't help me get any better.
 
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