6 months of work later... in need of feedback on this, going crazy

[Neomind]

Hello again guys! =)

I've been quite a lot out of this forum, which I shouldn't, but I've been quite going on and off music (blablabla excuses).

So here it goes. Should I beef up more the intro? Do you think it's coherent enough?

Thanks in advance!
https://soundcloud.com/neomindmusic/neomind-chemistry-stay-up/s-fPqEw

EDIT: BTW, track is private, only for this forum, so you should go to the link itself, sorry!

 

[Kanther]

Man so many views and no replies.... Anyways I'm no expert, but the intro and the drop are so different went from super chill to just crazy in your face i would maybe beef up the drums and tone the bass down a little. just my 2 cents other than that good job.