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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by safety, Sep 18, 2009.

  1. safety

    safety double safety

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  2. TongueFlap

    TongueFlap Flappin'

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    will listen later dude, @ work atm :(
     
  3. Teddy

    Teddy 60% Staff Member

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    thats some deep business there man! sounding good!
     
  4. co0ke

    co0ke windowlicker

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    like the pads. think the kick pattern rolling into the drop could be changed. snare sounds bit sharp on highs n could mayb do with a midlevel one worked in? unless thats the sound u wanted? really like the conga groove and vocal sample. nice track man
     
  5. safety

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    thanks for checking it out. i wanted a snappy feel to the snare but also put quite a heavy reverb on the high end of it, so maybe that's a bit over the top.

    what did you not like about the roll?
     
  6. co0ke

    co0ke windowlicker

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    this is stupid but i couldnt explain how i thought it would sound better so i recreated the drum part before the drop so i could make a variation to demo. trouble is cos i kept listenin to yours and i ended up liking it. im a waste!
     
  7. subprime

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    You take it down?
     
  8. dar kist

    dar kist KYRO

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    i like the intro man, all sounds very well put togeather but the snare is to harsh, it sounds nice but think it could come down like 3 db and mayb add another mid freq snare with it, nice bass, the feel to the track is wicked. good work all n all
     
  9. safety

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    ok then, i'll work on the snare. might even add more in if the tune works with a more formulaic pattern. anyone think the kick is overpowering? only listened ti this in a few different environments but i get the feeling it might be, but then if no one's said anything, maybe it's not. thoughts?
     
  10. Gloria

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    fuck this is brilliant!