[4x4] Fatkids - Bus Window

[Fatkidscantjump]

Experimenting other genres... this time i dont really know how to call it, is it deep house? tech house? minimal? shit ? lol, i dont know. But all feedbacks are greatly appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/azoteliquid%2Ffatkids-bus-window

peace

 

[Nucleoid]

I really, really like the pad, ambient thing coming in at 1:02. it's perfect
I don't like when it starts to get the high end tho, it makes it too much deadmau5 sound for me to like
(edit: later in the track it really works. I didn't realise I've been listening to the song for 5 minutes now)

Still nice job, you could consider bringing in a subtle kick at 1:32 to fill it out a bit.

Can I recommend some artists/songs for you for inspiration?
-Trentemoller (for instance "Change" or "Late Night Cab")
-Shlohmo (especially Antigravity : Low Limit Remix)

 

[Deleted member 85438]

Don't really know what your going after with this but the beginning bored me, percussion sounds good for a while but gets old fast try adding more variation to the rythm, that said I enjoyed the second half way more then the first and began to enjoy the ambience.

 

[d-low]

this tune is wicked dude, love the atmosphere.

 

[Fatkidscantjump]

I really, really like the pad, ambient thing coming in at 1:02. it's perfect
I don't like when it starts to get the high end tho, it makes it too much deadmau5 sound for me to like
(edit: later in the track it really works. I didn't realise I've been listening to the song for 5 minutes now)

Still nice job, you could consider bringing in a subtle kick at 1:32 to fill it out a bit.

Can I recommend some artists/songs for you for inspiration?
-Trentemoller (for instance "Change" or "Late Night Cab")
-Shlohmo (especially Antigravity : Low Limit Remix)

Thanks, yeah i was thinking about adding more elements in the "break" part because i find it a little bit too long.
Could you tell me the time you dont like the high end "deadmau5" sound?

I already know Shlohmo (discovered him with that Low limit remix in Brownswood Electric compilations... top notch stuff), and i LOVE trentemoller, especially songs like Moan or The Forest, masterpieces... Love it. Thanks anyways

Don't really know what your going after with this but the beginning bored me, percussion sounds good for a while but gets old fast try adding more variation to the rythm, that said I enjoyed the second half way more then the first and began to enjoy the ambience.

Yeah I agree with you first part is a little bit boring but since it was my first try at this kind of musical genre i kinda copyed other tracks that starts with just kick / hats and some percs / bass as an intro.. It helped me construct the track.

this tune is wicked dude, love the atmosphere.

glad you like it, thanks

thank you all for feedback !