The intro seemed a bit long, but I did enjoy when you got to the break. I did notice that the break was heavily filtered when it started, maybe you could turn down the filtration as you progress? It sounds a bit thin (which is fine in the beginning). By 2:00 it's really flowing nicely, has a very calm and contemplative mood to it. The breakdown at 2:15 or so was nice. It does feel like a lot of new ideas come in at the second drop. I kind of prefer a hard hit of what I've already heard for a second drop, but maybe someone with more experience than me can speak to the issue. The outro was nice, and book-ended the song well.