The intro seemed a bit long, but I did enjoy when you got to the break. I did notice that the break was heavily filtered when it started, maybe you could turn down the filtration as you progress? It sounds a bit thin (which is fine in the beginning). By 2:00 it's really flowing nicely, has a very calm and contemplative mood to it. The breakdown at 2:15 or so was nice. It does feel like a lot of new ideas come in at the second drop. I kind of prefer a hard hit of what I've already heard for a second drop, but maybe someone with more experience than me can speak to the issue. The outro was nice, and book-ended the song well.
Very pretty the piano is done perfectly. The mids of your bass could have more character to them but that is just opinion. Over all this song is pretty good. I would say to much intro not enough drop but you can make your own track