4 Points - Untitled (Roller)

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  1. alexanthony

    alexanthony Impact (Engage Audio)

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    Eazy!

    A tune I made my two mates

    Any advice, especially on the structure or sounds to add would be great, will return the favour as always

    The link is with the space after.com
    https://soundcloud.com /den_uk/4-points-untitled/s-AFXSX
     
  2. maschinistom

    maschinistom Active Member

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    link doesn't work
     
  3. alexanthony

    alexanthony Impact (Engage Audio)

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    if you delete the space after .com does it?
     
  4. Virul

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    It does work without the space !
    Nice track, really liking it !
    My suggestions would be to make the hats a bit louder during the first 20 sec (if you want us to hear them...)
    At 2:13 when it comes back to the drone-thingy, it feels a bit sudden, you could leave one mid-bass sound after turning off the drums maybe, to smooth the transition.
    The second drop may lack a bit of bass (but maybe that's just me and my system) the kick is really picking out compared to it. The hollow mid could be a bit louder as well (but maybe that's just because I love this kind of sound :p)
    I've been working on the same kind of track, I'll probably hit you up on SC to get your thoughts at some point ;)
     
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  5. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Really nice track. Drums and Bass are spot on. Lots of call and answer fx to keep it interesting. Just a wonderful track man.
     
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    Nice work. Good selection of sounds that all seem to work together.

    Plenty of effects and variations to keep it moving. Enjoyed listening to it.
     
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    agree with everyone, nice track just needs some more elements coming in and out
     
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  8. alexanthony

    alexanthony Impact (Engage Audio)

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    Thank you everyone for your kind words and advice as well. Meeting the boys today for all day/night sesh so well work on this and get a new one on the go!

    Big ups!
     
  9. Brex

    Brex The house guy

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    Got a lot of time for this. Great sound. Followed.