tommy gun---
i like that bassline actually...yeah, the drums need some work...layering is always a good solution (alot of times i layer several drumloops and eq em differently)...the only thing i don't care for is the synth in the background, other than that it's a cool tune...
happy dayz---
didn't like this one at all, sorry...the combination of those synths didn't sound appealing at all...
the untitled one---
the bassline isn't that bad, i think what kills these tunes is those 'gay' (for lack of a better term) synths behind em is what makes em 'cheesy' as someone else said...the bassline itself is pretty cool, just maybe with a different bass sound...that seems to be the problem with these tunes---the actual synths and bass tones (except for the one on tommy gun) sound too cheesy, i don't think it's necesarily the basslines themself, they actually have a true-playaz sort of feel to em...
check out my 'shuffle beat' tune on here---i'm sure some would call it cheese as well...
