3 little tunes...

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by The69thDynasty, Feb 3, 2004.

  1. The69thDynasty

    The69thDynasty Member

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    Heres a few tunes which have been put together over the last couple of days,with a little tuition from a mate.PLEASE tell me what one u like best. I need hints,tips and lotsa feedback if poss?
     

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    jay walker 1/2 of Passive/Aggressive

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    Tommy Gun is the one to work on - That bass is nice!!! (y)

    What you make the bass noise in?

    The drums need major attention - you need to beef the kicks an snares up (try layering two different kicks/snares.

    I said before about choppin some breaks up, still think its worth trying!

    Im on AIM, you on there Steve? :hagglers:
     
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    nice bass sound .....
    i was wondering how u made it too...
    def the one to work with
     
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    Safety. The bass was made in fruity loops usin the 3x osc and playin with the attack/amount/filter! Cheers mate
     
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    i can't say they sound bad or anything they just sound really cheesy. for example that happydayz track. i'm sorry. geez. can't give you any uplifting critism on this one dude. sorry!
     
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    Ha! I know theyre cheesy. Everything i do ends up bein cheese. Wait for the nxt attempt, its slowly gettin there and gettin darker.
     
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    Dave_Akuma aka composite.human

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    tommy gun---
    i like that bassline actually...yeah, the drums need some work...layering is always a good solution (alot of times i layer several drumloops and eq em differently)...the only thing i don't care for is the synth in the background, other than that it's a cool tune...

    happy dayz---
    didn't like this one at all, sorry...the combination of those synths didn't sound appealing at all...

    the untitled one---
    the bassline isn't that bad, i think what kills these tunes is those 'gay' (for lack of a better term) synths behind em is what makes em 'cheesy' as someone else said...the bassline itself is pretty cool, just maybe with a different bass sound...that seems to be the problem with these tunes---the actual synths and bass tones (except for the one on tommy gun) sound too cheesy, i don't think it's necesarily the basslines themself, they actually have a true-playaz sort of feel to em...

    check out my 'shuffle beat' tune on here---i'm sure some would call it cheese as well...