DnB 2nd Track ever

[iLenny]

Hi guys,

I just started producing like 3 months ago and this is my 2nd track! I would love to hear what you guys think so i can improve producing. Tell me what you think, and be honest please. Here is the track:

https://soundcloud.com/lennart-van-iperen%2Flenny-sonar

 

[concept beats]

Basic track, but if you are a newbie this is a good goal (in 3 months i learned what are automations, lol). Practice your mixing and eq in order to avoid the mud (especially in the low end) and learn how scales and notes work to build your melodies properly (music theory is very very important). The snare is a bit floppy and that's a bad thing because it is meant to sound loud and punchy, sometimes you need to use a good amount of compression and some other times you just need to find the right sample. The rest is not that bad, read tons of guides and articles about music production and practice a lot and you'll get good results.
Cheers, Concept

 

[iLenny]

Thnx for the feedback! I worked on the eq and snare, it sounds alot better already. I will post the new version tomorrow.
Again thnx for the feedback
Cheers

 

[iLenny]

New version is up