Drum & Bass 2nd Life - Space Bro v1.0 (I'm sure this title gives you a good idea of what kinda...

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  1. snowbound

    snowbound New Member

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    Please let me know what you all think!!! I've probably listened to this track far to many times to know what needs improvement at this point. I do value every ones opinion.

     
  2. snowbound

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    Re: 2nd Life - Space Bro v1.0 (I'm sure this title gives you a good idea of what kind

    Constructive criticism? Anyone? You can tell me if it sucks and has absolutely no musical value btw. ;)
     
  3. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Re: 2nd Life - Space Bro v1.0 (I'm sure this title gives you a good idea of what kind

    First tip: The more constructive criticism you leave the more people will leave you.
    The track is not bad at all. In fact I enjoyed it. The tone is happy and the mix sound good on my end. The vocal is cool. You could use more dynamics with your drums, and the crash is a little to loud. Other than that i thought it was good.
     
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    Re: 2nd Life - Space Bro v1.0 (I'm sure this title gives you a good idea of what kind

    Good melodies and ideas. as IV4 said, needs some drum work. The snare especially it feels kind of loose. It needs more punch.

    I like the soundscape of this.
     
  5. snowbound

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    Thanks guys. I plan on using this site more in the future in order to provide feedback to others. I just started producing not long ago so I always come here for what I consider educated opinions.
     
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    Re: 2nd Life - Space Bro v1.0 (I'm sure this title gives you a good idea of what kind

    Drums need a lot of work, not a fan of most of the synth timbres, bass sounds weak on my headphones. I think there is plenty of potential, some parts sound out of place but just try to get a bit more experimental with pretty much all sounds.
     
  7. d-low

    d-low I know you got soul

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    Re: 2nd Life - Space Bro v1.0 (I'm sure this title gives you a good idea of what kind

    oouch, i mean this in the best possible way, but bro that synth noise is harsh on the ears! sorry i cant commit to listen to this !