2 WIP, untitled and 'Spelunking'

[Nice]

Hey guys, new to the forum and fairly new to the DnB scene. Been working on improving by showing my friends, but none of them produce or listen to much DnB. So, I figured it was time to join a forum and have my horrible music shown to the public! Please tell me your honest feelings about these two tracks! Thanks much in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/nicemonday/untitled

http://soundcloud.com/nicemonday/spelunking

 

[Sid Fidla James]

not a bad idea.
drums need turning up and sub needs turning down. imo.
but a good start. keep it up

 

[Nice]

Thanks for the feedback Sid! Anyone else with some feedback? I'm very curious as to what others think of these tracks!

 

[dar kist]

untilted is pretty good, need to work on beefing the drums up a bit. the more variation with the bass the better, keeps the track sounding fresh. nice track thou

spelunking also good, nice liquid vibe going on love the atmosphere, again beef them drums up a bit and you have a great track.