2 sketches are they good idk.

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Working on 2 different bits the past three or four days, thought id seek a bit of feedback on the ideas. The second track arrangement is off at about 4 minutes or so, basically, if i were you i would just skim these and see if they are shit or worth trying on a bit more - and i will put what you say into my notes for remix or into my mental box of tools. thank you all.
https://soundcloud.com/michael-goetz-975677037%2Fsammys-6thbirthday



https://soundcloud.com/michael-goetz-975677037%2Fmondaymay15remx3ayy

 

[maschinistom]

hello PD !! both tracks sound very advanced technically, i prefer track #1 though.

track #1: very interesting sound design, esp. the stereo effects. not a big fan of the bass rhythm & sound around 0:50 tbh. this tracks seems to survive with no clear structure, build ups/releases ... whcih is kinda new to me. I think this is intentional by you, is it? easy flowing tune?

track #2: dreamy intro, good! love the synth sounds, nice! the neuro bass in from ~45 sec doesn't match the atmo imo but sounds massive. also, here not many up/down parts in the track, I think prefer these kinda steady flowing tunes to rollercoaster smashers, correct?

not my cupa tea but good work bro !!
esp. your drum work is top notch !!

 

[gregorkarbowski]

I liked the second one more this progresive touch but like maschinistom said a bit more structure could help both of the tracks. A little something more predictable for the people to get into the sound... imo cheers

 

[IV4]

I am just going to focus in on the first track. You have some really cool sounds, but your arrangement is lacking. Not that how you arrange is a bad thing. But the drums do get boring after awhile and the track seems disconnected with it's self. Arranging some of your mid bass and effects into a call and answer method could provide a bit of structure. Also, at the end of every 32 to 64 bars make it dramatic enough to change up the song, like cutting out your drums.

 

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Thank you to those who gave some responses or even just listened. I agree with the main point of the three above members- i need to work on some organization of the loops into a nice sounding arrangement. this is the aspect of production that i think is my weakest at this point. i just uploading something i made last 4 or 5 hours, maybe the arrangement makes more sense but possibly not, i am/was one probably makes my music kind of not make too much sense.