Tone1304
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2 new Jump Up 1finished and1WIP
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Comments for she made me...
Intro rather bland, kick and snare rather weak
Don't really hear much sub bass
Could use more fx or incidental sounds if you know what i mean throughout to keep it interesting
Good general jump up idea, bass needs more development though
Definitely works as a song though
tinitius comments...
I think the kick and snare are too weak again
sounds like you need more breaks layered over your percussion in certain areas or maybe the percussion that you do have playing needs to be high passed a bit more
again i would throw in more fx and shit to spice it up a bit
Intro rather bland, kick and snare rather weak
Don't really hear much sub bass
Could use more fx or incidental sounds if you know what i mean throughout to keep it interesting
Good general jump up idea, bass needs more development though
Definitely works as a song though
tinitius comments...
I think the kick and snare are too weak again
sounds like you need more breaks layered over your percussion in certain areas or maybe the percussion that you do have playing needs to be high passed a bit more
again i would throw in more fx and shit to spice it up a bit
Tone1304
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- Southend-on-sea
Cheers for the feedback, i will definitly sort all them problems
