2 new Jump Up 1finished and1WIP

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Tone1304, Sep 18, 2013.

  1. Tone1304

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    Thats not my cup of tea nevertheless I love the the first track :D
    pretty deep bassline and cool synths! the drums could be a little bit fatter for my taste but nothing serious.
     
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    Comments for she made me...
    Intro rather bland, kick and snare rather weak
    Don't really hear much sub bass
    Could use more fx or incidental sounds if you know what i mean throughout to keep it interesting
    Good general jump up idea, bass needs more development though
    Definitely works as a song though

    tinitius comments...
    I think the kick and snare are too weak again
    sounds like you need more breaks layered over your percussion in certain areas or maybe the percussion that you do have playing needs to be high passed a bit more
    again i would throw in more fx and shit to spice it up a bit
     
  4. Tone1304

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    Cheers for the feedback, i will definitly sort all them problems