2 new 86bpm projects

[SIRUS]

My attempt at writing something sexy. Not sure where to go with these now though. Always feels like there is something missing as I think i get carried away and start arranging before i've really built the track up enough to stay interesting. Not sure about the intro/outro to dreamin eyes either. Going to try out some new pads and atmospheric sounds.

Any advice or similar tracks to highlight what these are lacking extremely welcome.

 

[Manu Forti]

These are properly good Sirus, first one is chill af but the vocal for me is too prominent. Maybe cut the vocal out for 16 / 32 then bring back in?

Dreaming eyes just needs a little change on the second drop and would be perfect.

 

[SIRUS]

Cheers Ron. I did think about cutting the vocals back on the first. Good idea for the second tune, will give it a go.

 

[Derelicts Of Tomorrow]

very nicely done on both. it's difficult to pull off minimal tracks like these but you've nailed it, respect.

 

[WhoSayReload?]

Dreamin Eyes is a bad tune! I really like the more ambient bits, sounds really musical! I would say compare to Exit recs style tracks people like Fracture, Stray and Chimpo to give you a little more insight into arrangement and mixing.

I think it needs more impact on the drops, it just kind of drops out of nowhere, some risers or splashy effects or crashes might improve it.

 

[SIRUS]

Dreamin Eyes is a bad tune! I really like the more ambient bits, sounds really musical! I would say compare to Exit recs style tracks people like Fracture, Stray and Chimpo to give you a little more insight into arrangement and mixing.

I think it needs more impact on the drops, it just kind of drops out of nowhere, some risers or splashy effects or crashes might improve it.

Thanks man.

I was struggling to get it to really drop, i think that is what stands out as lacking most. A few fillers ie risers and fx will help that out. Good shout. Will try and switch it up for a second drop to add a bit of movement and momentum too.

 

[BattleteK]

Really unique vibes on those two, not really sure about the vocal panning tho on the first. I like it more central, but i really like the lush, chilled out vibe you have created. It really is something different maybe throw in a ride or something in the second part for some variation?

 

[Morah]

Super chill. I like the Dune in July track but i agree with @ManuForti that the vocal need a bit of focus, feels a bit random to me.
Dreamin eyes have a cool vibe as well I like it a lot but for my personal taste, the bass is very dry sounding in comparison to the rest of the track.

Really cool tracks, though.

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