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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by WOP!l6, Jun 6, 2016.

  1. WOP!l6

    WOP!l6 New Member

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    Recently I bought myself a new gift.
    Fl Studio Mobile.
    The in-app soundlibrary ofcourse pretty much sucked, but the toy was a good purchase.
    It isn't a full DAW. It is just a little app that you can use on the fly when you feel the need of composing a tune somewhere on the road. Personally, I get that a lot.

    Here is a link to my latest loop.



    I am new to this forum. Any help would be welcome.

    WOP!l6
     
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    Derelicts Of Tomorrow Breaksmith

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    it's pretty muddy bro, defo needs some EQ lovin and maybe a HP break layered under the main beat
     
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    To be honest...
    This one was made with a smartphone and a €10,- headphone.

    Never checked it on decent monitors.
     
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    Derelicts Of Tomorrow Breaksmith

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    all good my dude :2thumbs:
     
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    I checked it, and it was really muddy!
    I uploaded a newer version.
    Can you check it for me?

    I also wonder what you think of the composition. I don't care much for ultra clear soundquality. When the composition is okay, there's space left to tweak all the MIDI track and cpncentrate on sound quality and maybe a finale mastering session, right?
     
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    not sure whats happening with the 2nd snare hit but it is way to quiet. composition is fine. is this made with single hits? its a bit lifeless. i'd personally layer in a hp break to juice it up a bit
     
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    22 track, some hits, most, are dubbed. But most are fl studio package sounds. Did not use a monitor, but headphones, that might show