1st tune, any advice/opinions?

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  1. Sentient

    Sentient New Member

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    http://soundcloud.com/sentientuk/sentient-the-book-wip-14-12-09

    still very much WIP but just wanted to see what people think of the general ideas etc

    gonna add a high end synth to the bass and edit the drums to make them more interesting. personally think the snare sounds weak so will layer that and eq it better.

    any constructive criticism is welcome:)
     
  2. Robert G

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    is that a sample from torchwood at the start lol, sounds good man.
     
  3. Sentient

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    Sample is from the 1st Evil Dead film,

    cheers for checking
     
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    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Yeah the intro sounds wicked mate. Personally I think the bass sounds a little too "wide" kinda surrounds everything, either that or it's simply a little too loud.

    Oh, and just at the top of this forum you'll see a sub forum named "new talent and track reviews", thats where you should be posting your work mate, just a friendly heads up ;)
     
  5. Sentient

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    Think it may be a case of it being to loud, but probably does need a tweek also.

    opps, if a mod wants to move this or something then that'd be appreciated.
    cheers for the heads up
     
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    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    No worries mate, no big deal.
     
  7. SLUMP

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    loved the intro thought the rest was pretty good but could do with some work great job for your first though i am still absolutely useless
     
  8. Sentient

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    Cheers:D

    still loads to do. slow progress.
     
  9. 3xit

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    aww this is so much nicer than the dubstepforum......

    no alpacas or anythIng!!
     
  10. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    thank you. whats an alpaca?
     
  11. Sentient

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    Need to hear the high end synth before I make a judgement. Does sound pretty tight and the intro is well cool! Large up!
     
  13. Fishy:)

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    Sounds good musicially. its almost nothing but bass tho. and the bass is too much clouding up the whole thing. u need something in the high end like a synth or something