1st shot at drum n bass

[SweetStarZ]

Hey guys. I just wanted to post here my first toon for you guys to criticise (constructively ofc) it.

http://soundcloud.com/sweetstarz/sweetstarz-close-sky-a-better

Please post the criticism on soundcloud if you could


Regards and I hope it's not so bad.

 

[SweetStarZ]

http://soundcloud.com/sweetstarz/sweetstarz-near-me New tune.

http://soundcloud.com/sweetstarz/sweetstarz-close-sky-maybe-the even a better version of the previous choon.