1st HIP HOP attempt (WIP)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Mr Fletch, Jul 27, 2011.

  1. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    So decided the other day to try my hand at something well out of my comfort zone.

    This is a really early WIP but I just dont know if it's any good, as I dont deal with hip hop much. So what you guys and gals reckon? Should I continue and finish this? or throw it on the scrap heap?

     
  2. Nicholas Stigma

    Nicholas Stigma STEADY ON OL' CHAP

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    Very nice instrumental IMO, uses the most common a Piano and some sweet beats.
    Your track on your signature is awesome aswell :)
     
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    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Thanks mate, so i should continue?
     
  4. miszt

    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    nice 80's oldskool sound to it, nice! i wonder if the piano might have a better groove if it wasnt on the first beat of the phrase? not that i know fuk all about hiphop tho lol
     
  5. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Me neither, thats the problem lol
     
  6. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    its clean and well produced but i dont dig the beat the bass and the piano, its too cheesy. you should go darker youre obviously good at it
     
  7. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Thats all of it then....;)

    I actually really struggle writing dark stuff if I'm honest mate, never seems as dark as I aim for lol
     
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    Pretty nice piano, i think its a little dry tho
     
  9. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    soundin nice man but i kinda agree maybe the piano offbeat would sound nicer