1st HIP HOP attempt (WIP)

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#4
nice 80's oldskool sound to it, nice! i wonder if the piano might have a better groove if it wasnt on the first beat of the phrase? not that i know fuk all about hiphop tho lol
 

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I Am Not The King
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#6
its clean and well produced but i dont dig the beat the bass and the piano, its too cheesy. you should go darker youre obviously good at it
 

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#7
its clean and well produced but i dont dig the beat the bass and the piano, its too cheesy. you should go darker youre obviously good at it
Thats all of it then....;)

I actually really struggle writing dark stuff if I'm honest mate, never seems as dark as I aim for lol
 
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