1st HIP HOP attempt (WIP)

[Mr Fletch]

So decided the other day to try my hand at something well out of my comfort zone.

This is a really early WIP but I just dont know if it's any good, as I dont deal with hip hop much. So what you guys and gals reckon? Should I continue and finish this? or throw it on the scrap heap?

https://soundcloud.com/mr-fletch%2Fhip-hop%2Fs-CKlVZ

 

[Nicholas Stigma]

Very nice instrumental IMO, uses the most common a Piano and some sweet beats.
Your track on your signature is awesome aswell

 

[Mr Fletch]

Thanks mate, so i should continue?

 

[miszt]

nice 80's oldskool sound to it, nice! i wonder if the piano might have a better groove if it wasnt on the first beat of the phrase? not that i know fuk all about hiphop tho lol

 

[Mr Fletch]

nice 80's oldskool sound to it, nice! i wonder if the piano might have a better groove if it wasnt on the first beat of the phrase? not that i know fuk all about hiphop tho lol

Me neither, thats the problem lol

 

[logikz]

its clean and well produced but i dont dig the beat the bass and the piano, its too cheesy. you should go darker youre obviously good at it

 

[Mr Fletch]

its clean and well produced but i dont dig the beat the bass and the piano, its too cheesy. you should go darker youre obviously good at it

Thats all of it then....

I actually really struggle writing dark stuff if I'm honest mate, never seems as dark as I aim for lol

 

[Fishy:)]

Pretty nice piano, i think its a little dry tho

 

[MARKLAR]

soundin nice man but i kinda agree maybe the piano offbeat would sound nicer