DnB 170bpm jungle track, melodic and rough

[gremino]

Hi, this is my first post here

Jungle track with a bit more modern touch i guess.

https://soundcloud.com/gremino%2Froamer

 

[Uprising]

everything sounds a little too randomly put together to me, i really like the 1:55 mark where it becomes alot more minimal and tied together, id love to hear a new track based around that loop, if it were me id do that and base it off of a much darker/vibey sounding atmosphere/idea
keep hustlin!

- Uprising

 

[astraia90]

Yeah too much going on...can't really say much what should do or not..its not my style of music but i always listen track atleast two times to really catch it and trying to find something what works and what not from my perspective ofcourse..its always personal what you want to express with your music.

 

[gremino]

Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment, even if you didn't completely like the track (constructive criticism seems to be one of this forum's main ideas though). I wanted to make oldschool styled jungle where there's alot going on.