DnB Track Feedback Uk old school neuro influence

[AyusDnb]

Yoyo I got a track that I need feedback on. Goin for the raw old school elements. All advice welcome.

https://soundcloud.com/ayusouk%2Foutback-private-self-mastered

 

[4ths]

this is a pretty solid start!

i'd advise working on the phrasing a bit, adding a few more elements, it gets somewhat overly repetitive.

also maybe some sci fi vocal samples if you want that ol' school neuro feel.

 

[IV4]

I would advise, please put this in the proper sub-section of the forum. Not that the track is bad but because it is generally considered polite here to post in the proper sections. Also, you will get better feedback.
Thank You

 

[logikz]

yeah wrong sub forum, if you post it in new talent, i will post feedback.

 

[Neojunk]

nice one!
i would add a bit more variation as well.
maybe a 'switch-up' neuro-bass bite every other bar?

and how did u get the bass sound?