DnB Please tell me your impressions and feeling of one of my beginner tracks.

[Sub Gene]

https://soundcloud.com/rakporkolt%2Ftrip-on-ceti-alpha-v-demo

 

[Leniz]

If u want feedback post it in here: https://dnbforum.com/forums/new-talent-track-reviews.21/
Also I think its too loud. Also the tempo could be a little faster. Sounds nice but some elements have too many High Frequencies it just hurts.