Looking for some feedback on a dark roller

[Caaza]

safe guys, looking for feedback on this. any input on arrangement and the mix would be greatly appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/caaza%2Fdropshot

 

[Manu Forti]

Sounds good, a bit more thought on the intro and it would roll nicely.

Id EQ the bass sound more and add soem distortion on the mids see if i can shape that into somtehing real nice.

 

[maschinistom]

yep, sound goods imo as well. very dark tune
i suggest to edit some of the beat to bring in a few variations.

 

[WhoSayReload?]

I reckon the low end sounds a bit muddy and I think it's missing something in the mid range to keep me interested, maybe add more vocals like a full verse? I think what you've got is a solid base though