i'm liking the ideas, but I would change up the kick sample, add some more processing to the snare to make it sound fuller, and more eqing out frequencies that are not needed.
i like the vibes at the beginning with the vocal samp in the back. the kick does sound like it has a bit of a ring to it. the riffs are dope as well especially when everything gets going more. the snare could stand out a bit more not to over powering tho since this has a real nice lay back feel. i think its mostly in the noisy tail of it that doesn't seem to sit. perhaps more of a rim to keep things chill? just my thought, but really like this.
here is one I'm working on atm. first try at working into a limiter, any feed back on how its sounding on another system would be great!!
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