Evasion - Tanglewood dreams

[EvezDroppin]

https://soundcloud.com/jack-evasion-evo%2Ftanglewood-dreams

hi guys,

Fairly early clip I've got here, recorded some guitar clips and got a little vibe going...

2 main questions I've got...

1. is the subline after the drop a bit plain and not moving notes enough?

2. is the variation 32 bars after the drop a bit too in your face for the drums?


Thanks

 

[Robert _G]

Very nice, love the transition.

 

[maschinistom]

i agree, i love the chilly atmo of this one. the guitars sounds nice, well matching the track.
love your rolling bass, and the synth are cool. maybe a bit overdone, could be smoother, but that is personal taste.
excellent track !

 

[maschinistom]

1. is the subline after the drop a bit plain and not moving notes enough?
> not imo.

2. is the variation 32 bars after the drop a bit too in your face for the drums?
> don't think so.

 

[EvezDroppin]

Thanks for checking guys... So went in a bit on it last night... the way i usually work is get a main bulk of the structure down then go back and relisten and tweak from there, so i could have gone a bit far with this I'm not sure.

https://soundcloud.com/jack-evasion-evo/$new-song161/s-7GM7j

Remove the dollar sign from the link above and it should work.

 

[Morah]

Hey, really like this track its going in a cool direction. i think all the elements work well together its just a case of mixing it well in my opinion.
i would love to hear it when its done

Ben

 

[Such Music Records]

Nice track! send us a copy when its done