Good ideas. Arrangement seems to be interesting but the clips are to short to tell.
IMHO the breaks are done well but the drums need more improvement.
Drawback for me is that there is a guy with a strong vision - like a release date.
But you make the music public in a state where, from a mixing perspective, it is still at the beginning.
There seems to be no EQ, no Reverb, no Compression ... but this will change your sound dramatically.
So what exactly do you want to have feedback on? Hard to tell ... it cannot be the mix - or is it?