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    Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    With timeless telepathy am stayin evergreen,
    Aint never been tounge in cheek,
    Speak triple word score scrabble medley,
    And my hand saddles lead unearthly,
    Man am tertiary 3rd eye climbing,
    Gold mining gotta pick-axe the workload,
    Pick at this no go flow where the crows go,
    Its an omen phone no, friend final answer,
    Jackdaw cackle in murder,
    With no backdoor i battle static inertia,
    Unprepped for undertaker, disconnect euthanasia,
    Its blatant subjects morbid on the papers,
    Bland flavours falling-sand capers,
    mental planes stationed by erupting volcanoes
    the Icelandic, fire an ice Sanskrit,
    red-line type Smokey and the Bandit,
    band it, before it burns up the canvas,
    cattle grid scramblers wont ever understand us …





    bit morbid i know, but i go as The Styx, so the harrowing deathly utterance sits well .

    and if you didnt get some, the styx is ancient greek mythology, and they also believed crows were a bad omen of death .. blah blah blah , and jackdaws are crows aswell.. yano

    rest is pretty basic
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    Re: Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    i just saw "volcanoes" and "euthanasia" and decided it's probably going to be good...


    Will read the whole thing, get the panoramic view...
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    Re: Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    Quote Originally Posted by ETHIX View Post
    With timeless telepathy am stayin evergreen,
    Aint never been tounge in cheek,
    Speak triple word score scrabble medley,
    And my hand saddles lead unearthly,
    Man am tertiary 3rd eye climbing,
    Gold mining pick-axe the workload,
    Pick at this no go flow where the crows go,
    Its an omen phone no, friend final answer,
    Jackdaw cackle at murder,
    Non apparent backdoor, escape hatch unheard-a,
    Unprepped for undertaker, an forget euthanasia,
    Its blatant subjects morbid on the papers,
    Bland flavours falling-sand capers,
    mental planes stationed by erupting volcanoes
    the Icelandic, fire an ice Sanskrit,
    red-line type Smokey and the Bandit…



    bit morbid i know, but i go as The Styx, so the harrowing deathly utterance sits well .

    and if you didnt get some, the styx is ancient greek mythology, and they also believed crows were a bad omen of death .. blah blah blah , and jackdaws are crows aswell.. yano

    rest is pretty basic
    Fav bit. That some of yours Ethix you shrimp-eyed bastard or just something you found? I know you have admitted to posted random stuff before. You get along with a pal of mine who writes ryhmes.

    http://www.myspace.com/sintripitalforce

    Both of em are my boys. One producing and the other writting. Check em out let me know if the link works.

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    Re: Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    yea all mine, wrote it lastnite after a bottle of red wine ... it became some kind of twisted fuel

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    Quote Originally Posted by DJ Spliff View Post
    Fav bit. That some of yours Ethix you shrimp-eyed bastard or just something you found? I know you have admitted to posted random stuff before. You get along with a pal of mine who writes ryhmes.

    http://www.myspace.com/sintripitalforce

    Both of em are my boys. One producing and the other writting. Check em out let me know if the link works.
    thats weird , i clicked on the link right, and under their little profile pic it says " I write rhymes, to withstand the sands of time "


    and in that verse i just wrote ... have a look , i wrote this - " Bland flavors falling-sand capers " meaning the same..life is tasteless, and as time passes were robbed / done over / caught up in the antics / shenanigans.

    so yea, going back to what you said, i probs would like them .. obviously do write simiar to me haaha.. ill check em out later tonight.



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    Re: Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    Quote Originally Posted by ETHIX View Post
    yea all mine, wrote it lastnite after a bottle of red wine ... it became some kind of twisted fuel

    ---------- Post added at 09:04 ---------- Previous post was at 08:50 ----------



    thats weird , i clicked on the link right, and under their little profile pic it says " I write rhymes, to withstand the sands of time "


    and in that verse i just wrote ... have a look , i wrote this - " Bland flavors falling-sand capers " meaning the same..life is tasteless, and as time passes were robbed / done over / caught up in the antics / shenanigans.

    so yea, going back to what you said, i probs would like them .. obviously do write simiar to me haaha.. ill check em out later tonight.
    That's him alright. They'll love that you wrote that as a response. Ha ha ! beautiful symmetry!

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    Re: Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    trump



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    Re: Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    nice one man, i really like it. You might wanna check out this guy, if you don't know him already: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MDzlY0Lz-ac . He's got a similar style of poetry but different contexts, i suppose. I think it's pretty cool, dunno if I'm completely wrong, i only read this one of your poems

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    Re: Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    yes ethix, some excellent content in there, after reading it through a few times over a beat i think i see how you flow too which works really well, the last five lines were my fave part i think. We are definatly gunna have to link up sometime and do a colaboration or summink, safe.

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    Re: Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    thanks mate .. yea it abit of a weird flow, and the content is pretty abstract , but i do tend to write like that .. cheers fr checkin, and yea .. we'll have to get together soon and record somethin



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    Re: Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    i like it! lyrical prowess with the random bits, it takes true skill to be truly random. which is my posting is quite off some days, cant keep it up
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    Re: Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    cheers mate.. all makes sense and is relevant aswell , certain bits will be understandable to certain people, id like to think as a whole it could be understood tho .. but i do realise its random , been listening to a few artist recently, were i struggle to understand them, but it sounds good and meaningful , and a few listens later it clicks and the penny drops. spose its how i like writing



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    Re: Brain Fart Ting !!! ... comments / feedback ... plez

    Good shit man. Real good.

    Its blatant subjects morbid on the papers,
    Bland flavours falling-sand capers,

    That bar is ridiculously good bruv.

    Not too sure how you'd flow this over a beat though. You'd have to switch up your delivery a lot I guess.

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    I really like it mate.

    Only ever seen your freestyle stuff in the scatbox, so good to see a full written piece...

    Wasn't what i'd expect from you at all, but pleasantly surprised, really like the theme/feel & wordplay,as Brof said that:

    "Its blatant subjects morbid on the papers,
    Bland flavours falling-sand capers"

    Is heavy!

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    could we get some audio please, bout time you man up
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    aah yea . will be recording this week.. 100 %



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