L Fusion - Attention (Dubstep)

[djlfusion]

Bin a while since iv posted a track on here. Ino this is dnb forum but im a reg so thought id post this tune up here. started makin it this mornin so thers still work to be done but im quite happy wot iv done in a day, but id like to hear wot u lot think so please leave feedback wether its good or bad (jus make its constructive if bad and baring in mind its only the 1st day of making) thanks, peace.

http://soundcloud.com/djlfusion/l-fusion-attention

[djlfusion]

anybody.. feedback plz???

[Code:Red]

ye i'm feeling this man, i prefer my dirty grittier side to dubstep, for a days work, that aint bad going! keep at this one and post the mastered one when its finished! all i can say is the first snare is really quiet and the second is alot higher? is this intentional or just the bass taking over the snare a bit?

[rob_del_terror]

yeah cool track. like code:red said nice grimy gritty bline goin on, but the drums need to be sorted, just sound way to muffled.

[djlfusion]

ye jus bin workin on it n im about to upload it again the drums are sorted now thanx for the comments

[djlfusion]

If you wana check it again iv added a few things to it and sorted the drums and changed slightly and also added an extra 8 bars on the end.

http://soundcloud.com/djlfusion/l-fusion-attention

[rob_del_terror]

sweet. nice work.