Ice Suit - new track on soundcloud

[msmith222]

just posted a new "work in progress" on soundcloud. any thoughts welcome...

http://soundcloud.com/msmith222/ice-suit-082609

[llSpaMll]

dunno why nobodys commenting on your tune drums are tight n all the synths are clear no muddyness anywhere but you sould make some diff sound for the main bassline would sound mad im sure that sound you got going is perfect for the intro but yeah a couple more sounds would be great couldn't exactly say what but you could figure it out im sure.

[Zeal]

theres only one on there now bro called ice suite so ill listen to that haha

Locked...

drums aint too bad they quite tight

you got a break in there i use in nearly every tune lol

needs more in the build up to keep it interesting imo

Drop is ok, sub could be bigger

Needs more atmos and fx and such to really fill it out more

not a bad effort man, not my cuppa tea at all but its not to bad man

i rekon you need to fill out ur tunes more, with subtle atmospheres and sounds depending on the style u want to achieve of course

[msmith222]

yeah, finally a day from work off tomorrow, so i hope to add some more noise! i guess i could've waited to submit it to the podcast...

[msmith222]

@zeal, IISpaMII

thanks for the feedback, it can be hard to come by sometimes.

[H*product]

yea i liked it. if i had to be critical (constructively) i'd say it sonded a bit clinical/digital. some more noise in the background goes along way keep it up bro.

[msmith222]

appreciate the feedback. i can hear the "clinical" in it, thats a good way to put it. thanks!

[Protoplasym]

Prod sounds nice, loud, and crisp.

Listening in headphones so I can't really comment on the other bass layers during 1:48 - 2:20... not sure if they're hitting or not... they don't sound like they are though.

[Maxg]

nice track dude - big ups!