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    The Yellaman
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    First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

    Just got into producin' properly, finished my first tune.
    let us know what you think....



    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IxWDpTA-4zE


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    Re: First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

    Very good for a first track.

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    Re: First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

    Safe, nice one man.

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    Re: First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

    Nice sounds but not enough development. You could pad it out with some variation or a drop.

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    Re: First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

    Quote Originally Posted by Delinquent View Post
    Nice sounds but not enough development. You could pad it out with some variation or a drop.
    what do you mean mate by development man?
    the tune has got a drop.

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    Re: First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

    Bump

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    Re: First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

    My mistake...

    I just mean... different parts to it... But that's just my opinion it's hard to put what I mean into words.

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    Re: First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

    yeayea, i understand what you mean.
    cheers for the feedback!

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    Re: First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

    sounds good for a first track bro-keep at it

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    Re: First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

    Cheers mate

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    Re: First Tune, any feedback would be appreciated.

    soundin good.. bit more variation and it would be spanking

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