demo track i just made ... feedback accespted !

[12 inch grinch]

let us know what u think guys.. just some random beat i knocked up 1st attemped on reason 4.0

http://www.sendspace.com/file/s4vkne

[Lucidproduction]

u wanna be producing for a few months before uploading mate doesnt mean ur shit but nothing works straight away..

keep fuckin around nd it wil get better

[msmith222]

i would have to agree with lucid. this sounds very elementary, but practice makes perfect. also, i don''t know if maybe my download was messed up, but what i can hear sure isn't drum and bass. may want to look to a forum that caters to your genre? or just fire up the 175bpm machine and let loose...

[12 inch grinch]

yeh man its not dnb im not even a producer either just randomly fucked about with reason and thought id put up on hear see wat people was saying out of intrest..
litterally that was my 1st attempt on any sort of production ..
i have tunes with various producers with my vocals on them but im going to get into making tunes .. cheers for comments any how.!